I wrote these raps, tell me what you think (lyrics, please read)?

I want to give constructive criticism, I'm not a rapper myself but I listen to it alot :) Those lyrics aren't* bad but they do seem a little predictable! I love the theme behind it. A lot of popular rappers and even in music in general are big on metaphors, I see you hinting at them in your verses too! Definitely work them to a polish :) Keep feeling the soul in what your trying to confess I see it bleeding a story!! Keep a nice beat and you dont always have to rhyme!! If you want look up different types of poems and master them and even study some rappers of your choice songs. And you dont have to be perfect the first time! Try free styling and practicing and watch some online. Keep it up daily and the words will fall into place. Hope this helps :)